turtoring session... work from after school from Anthony M.

In Hurston" their eyes were watching god" it was shown that many people attiude change when more power comes in between others

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If Hurston wrote the book, then it would be hers.  There should be evidence of possession in the handle and the statement (find them).  The title should ALWAYS be capitalized, you know this.  As for the theme itself, the ending is confusing..."more power comes in between others."  You lost your reader here.  Say exactly what you are trying to say and then fix the syntactical errors (structure). Great try kiddo!

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