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Started this discussion. Last reply by Braelin Evans Oct 17, 2012. 2 Replies 0 Likes

Quote: keep them squares up out your circle.by( future) is stating that haters are all around you and that they try there best to keep you down and as long as you let them put you down, it's going to…Continue

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At 2:00pm on October 11, 2012, Pre-AP Dragon Den said…: Remember, it needs to be a general statement. Also, you are missing an announcement handle. You are oooooohhhhhh so close. Try one more time nad I think it will be there!

At 10:12pm on October 9, 2012, Pre-AP Dragon Den said…: the theme of the story is forgiveness to those who sin. God "gives us a inch and we take a mile " . And when we dont succeed, we ask forgiveness in wich we think we dont deserve.

This statement says a lot. Remember your statement cannot be too broad/general. I underlined the part in quotations simply because it is a cliche. You have to be careful about putting too many ideas into one theme statement. Choose one theme idea that you wish to focus on and go with it. Also, remember- you need a handle, "The Prodigal Son reveals/ exposes/shows/ ...."