Good idea...good use of kids...could have used more close in shots, eye level shots too...good transitions...kinda too long for some kids...they may tune out...they would also ask why she didn't go to the hospital
very good, loved the girls they did an awsome job thank to the your good directing skills, the lighting was good the dialouge was clear, the transitions were very well done, above it all i liked your message. Good job!
your actresses were great! I like that you showed all the aspects of being healthy! You showed healthy snacks and demonstrated workouts! It was a little dark but the dialogue was great! Great job Amy!
I eat to much junk food, too. Pre-planning was apparent ... well thought out ... and the scripting was excellent. The kids must have loved it. Production was excellent. Great camera angles and framing. Sound dialogue excellent. Message was wonderful. Cool transition to exercise scene. It was a bit dark and the one girl kept jumping out of frame. Loved exercises: hoola hoop, boxing, etc. Nice action and sound. I liked the circular transitions from scene to scene. Focus on the bed was a bit off. Couldn't read the yellow posters. Great credits. Thanks for sharing. Jim.
Great video!! I wanted to stop eating my twix and start exercising!...Clear message...clear shpts...nice transition and I want to try thr bananna ramma!
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